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The bar chart below provides information about the top ten rice producing countries in the world in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below provides information about the top ten rice producing countries in the world in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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the bar chart illustrates the main countries of
rice
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produceing
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producing
of
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in
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 the world in 2015.
overall
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, china,
india
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India
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,
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and indonisia
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indonisia
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Indonesia
 which countries are the top 3
rice
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 producers and
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the philippines
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philippines
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Philippines
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,brazil and
japan
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Japan
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gave
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have
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thrier
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higher
rice
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production
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as
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apply
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considerably.
china
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China
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is
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has
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 the
giant
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largest
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production
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 of
rice
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 which is
approxiamtely
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approximately
 160 000 thousand
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tones
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tonnes
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.
secondly
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 ,
india
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India
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produce
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produces
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 more than
100 000
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100,000
 thousand
tones
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rice
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of rice
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.
As well as
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,
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apply
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Indoneshia
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Indonesia
 and Bangladesh
plateauted
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plateaued
thier
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their
production
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nearly
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of nearly
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 40 000
tones
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. Bruma and philipines
gave
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apply
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contribute
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contributed
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for
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to
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globally
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global
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rice
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production
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 which is approximately 20000
tones
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. But
Indonisia
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Indonesia
 and Japan are the least
producer
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producers
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 of
rice
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 among these countries.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rice, production, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
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