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A lot of students find it difficult to write good essays. There is little that you can do to make your essays better or to the job easier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#students #essays #job
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I agree and here's why. First of all, students these days find it hard to write
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 that's why in the past people used to have better writing skills. Second of all, students find it hard to have new
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 because all of the
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 that you'd think about someone had thought about it before that's why it's harder these days, but you can improve your writing by using ai something that wasn't in the past and it's
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 for those who know how to use it, and you can use website's that help to correct
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 mistake suck as comma splice and spelling mistakes.
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, everything now is
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turning
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 so now you can just write on the computer and print it out unlike in the past.
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, students now might have
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 time
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 but you can improve using new tech
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 and more.
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clear comprehensive ideas
Make your essay more comprehensive by elaborating on your ideas or providing additional arguments. For example, provide more examples or discussion around how AI can specifically help improve writing skills.
logical structure
Use transitional phrases and linking words to ensure smooth flow between ideas. This will help clarify your points and make your essay easier to follow.
logical structure
While you have a clear introduction and conclusion, try dividing your essay into more paragraphs to highlight specific main points. This will enhance readability and cohesion.
relevant specific examples
Include more specific examples to support your main points. For instance, mention a particular AI tool and explain how it aids students.
introduction conclusion present
You have included an introduction that clearly states your position.
introduction conclusion present
Your conclusion effectively summarizes the main points of your essay.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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