The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.

The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.
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The bar chart illustrates the spending (in millions of
euros
) of people from four different
age
groups in Paris, France, on
cinema
visits, dining at
restaurants
, and
music
concerts
in 2019.
Overall
, spending habits varied across
age
groups, with younger people favouring
music
concerts
and older groups spending more on
restaurants
. The oldest
group
spent the least on all activities. The 18-25
age
group
spent the most on
music
concerts
, around 14
million
euros
, with
restaurants
at 12
million
euros
and cinemas at 10
million
euros
. In the 26-39
age
group
,
restaurants
were the most significant expenditure, approximately 18
million
euros
, with
music
concerts
and
cinema
being less
favored
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. The 40-55
group
displayed the highest spending on
restaurants
at nearly 20
million
euros
,
while
cinema
and
music
concert expenditures were equal at about 10
million
euros
each.
By contrast
, the 56-86
age
group
spent less money on all activities, being
cinema
the least popular
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