The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.

The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.
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The bar chart illustrates the spending (in millions of
euros
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) of people from four different
age
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groups in Paris, France, on
cinema
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visits, dining at
restaurants
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, and
music
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concerts
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in 2019.
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, spending habits varied across
age
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groups, with younger people favouring
music
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concerts
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and older groups spending more on
restaurants
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. The oldest
group
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spent the least on all activities. The 18-25
age
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group
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spent the most on
music
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concerts
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, around 14
million
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euros
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, with
restaurants
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at 12
million
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euros
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and cinemas at 10
million
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euros
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. In the 26-39
age
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group
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,
restaurants
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were the most significant expenditure, approximately 18
million
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euros
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, with
music
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concerts
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and
cinema
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being less
favored
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. The 40-55
group
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displayed the highest spending on
restaurants
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at nearly 20
million
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euros
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,
while
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cinema
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and
music
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concert expenditures were equal at about 10
million
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euros
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each.
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, the 56-86
age
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group
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spent less money on all activities, being
cinema
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the least popular
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