The line graph below shows who Americans spend their time with, by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram displays the information about the US Citizens spend their
time
based on many hours
from 20 to over 80 years
old. Overall
, the majority of people spend their time
alone and the lowest ratio at the end
of the period is with coworkers
.
At the early age from 20 to 30 years
old, the time
with their family fell off significantly from 4 hours
to nearly 1 hour and after that followed by friends. On the other hand
, coworkers
, partners, children and alone are starting to increase gradually, where personal time
started with the biggest in over 3 hours
.
In the period 30 to 40 years
old, alone and children sides share the same values at approximately 4 hours
. Nevertheless
, partners and coworkers
had stagnant stages while
taking time
with family and friends being the smallest. However
, at the stage of 50 years
old, the moment with children and coworkers
slowly decreased. In the end, living alone had the biggest hours
at 8 hours
while
the other categories only enjoyed by each other not over than 3 hours
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