The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A couple of layouts below illustrate the road entrance to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Overall
,it is plain to see that after 3 years of construction of town hospital became more comfortable for both the workers,
and the clients.
Before construction in 2007,pedestrians who wanted to leave the clinic's area on the busRemove the comma
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had to wait at in bus stop which was in the car park in a small place,it was uncomfortable for them,but in 2010 separate place opposite the road with two access medical centres and from city road through roundabout was provided for the bus station.
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a big area in the east of the health facility was assigned for public transport,Add a comma
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in 2007 the parking zone for staff and society was combined in one space, which could result
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the previous zone was left only for staff.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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