The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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the amount of selling Correct your spelling
compares
regarding
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of
bananas
in five Euopean
countries over the period of 5 years.
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European
,
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sales
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coffee
bananas
both
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, Switzerland and Denmark from 1999 to 2004. Correct article usage
the UK
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for
bananas
over the same period.
In 1999, sales
of coffee of
Switzerland were ranked the highest that was 3 Change preposition
in
miilions
of Correct your spelling
millions
million
euros
. Just five years later, this
figure was overtaken by UK
which Correct article usage
the UK
tookplace
the highest selling rank by 20 Correct your spelling
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millions
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million
euros
sales
. Although
sales
of coffe
in Sweden Correct your spelling
coffee
always
the lowest amongAdd a missing verb
are always
5
countries, the figures have still Correct article usage
the 5
saw
a 0.2 Change the verb form
seen
sawed
millions
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million euro
euros
growth.
The total sales
of bananas
were higher than coffee both
in 1999 and 2004, in which UK
contributed the most Correct article usage
the UK
sales
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million
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euros
and 47 millions
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million
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euros
seperately
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respectively
Bananas
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sales
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contrast
sales
of bananas
in Belgium and Sweden both
saw a sligh
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slight
millions
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million
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euros
to 1 millions
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million
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euros
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