The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The table
compaires
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compares
the amount of selling
regarding
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Fairtrade-labelled coffee and
bananas
in five
Euopean
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European
countries over the period of 5 years. It is noticeable that
,
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sales
of
coffe
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coffee
and
bananas
both
witnessed growth in
UK
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the UK
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, Switzerland and Denmark from 1999 to 2004.
Also
,
UK
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is the
best selling
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country
of
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bananas
over the same period. In 1999,
sales
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Switzerland were ranked the highest that was 3
miilions
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millions
million
of
euros
. Just five years later,
this
figure was overtaken by
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the UK
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which
tookplace
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took place
the highest selling rank by 20
millions
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euros
sales
.
Although
sales
of
coffe
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coffee
in Sweden
always
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the lowest among
5
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countries, the figures have still
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a 0.2
millions
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million euro
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euros
growth. The total
sales
of
bananas
were higher than coffee
both
in 1999 and 2004, in which
UK
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contributed the most
sales
among 5 countries
by
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15
millions
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million
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of
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euros
and 47
millions
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million
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euros
seperately
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respectively
.
Bananas
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selling amount
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in Switzerland and Denmark
both
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over fifth times growth. By
conctrast
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contrast
,
sales
of
bananas
in Belgium and Sweden
both
saw a
sligh
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slight
drop, from 1.8
millions
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million
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of
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euros
to 1
millions
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euros
and from 2
millions
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million
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euros
to 0.9
millions
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million
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euros
seperately
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separately
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, sales, both, uk, euros, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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