You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Press Submit to send to your teacher. Press Help to see model answer.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of visitors
to the Louvre, Vatican
museums, London Science, and Shenzhen from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, the number
of people who visited the Louvre and Vatican
art galleries increased over the period
, while
the number
of tourists who visited the London Science Museum
declined. Nevertheless
, Vatican
museums had the highest increase in the number
of visitors
in 2015.
Louvre had the biggest number
of tourists in 1980, at around 8 million
, and it rose slightly to below 10 million
at the end
of the period
. Vatican
Art Gallery started the period
at below 4 million
; however
, this
had the wildest fluctuation, with a massive jump to approximately 8 million
in 2015, meeting Louver Museum
the
same Change preposition
with the
number
of visitors
.
Meanwhile, the London Science Museum
began with 4 million
visitors
,
and decreased significantly to half that amount in 2015, which was 2 Remove the comma
apply
million
, the lowest number
in any other museum
. Shenzhen Museum
remained relatively steady at the same number
of visitors
throughout the period
, at around slightly less than 4 million
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