The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Press Submit to send to your teacher. Press Help to see model answer.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the Louvre, Use synonyms
Vatican
museums, London Science, and Shenzhen from 1980 to 2015.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of people who visited the Louvre and Use synonyms
Vatican
art galleries increased over the Use synonyms
period
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of tourists who visited the London Science Use synonyms
Museum
declined. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
Vatican
museums had the highest increase in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
in 2015.
Louvre had the biggest Use synonyms
number
of tourists in 1980, at around 8 Use synonyms
million
, and it rose slightly to below 10 Use synonyms
million
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at the end
of the Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
Vatican
Art Gallery started the Use synonyms
period
at below 4 Use synonyms
million
; Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
this
had the wildest fluctuation, with a massive jump to approximately 8 Linking Words
million
in 2015, meeting Louver Use synonyms
Museum
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the
same Change preposition
with the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
.
Meanwhile, the London Science Use synonyms
Museum
began with 4 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
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,
and decreased significantly to half that amount in 2015, which was 2 Remove the comma
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million
, the lowest Use synonyms
number
in any other Use synonyms
museum
. Shenzhen Use synonyms
Museum
remained relatively steady at the same Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
throughout the Use synonyms
period
, at around slightly less than 4 Use synonyms
million
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