You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Press Submit to send to your teacher. Press Help to see model answer.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words. Press Submit to send to your teacher. Press Help to see model answer.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of
visitors
to the Louvre,
Vatican
museums, London Science, and Shenzhen from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, the
number
of people who visited the Louvre and
Vatican
art galleries increased over the
period
,
while
the
number
of tourists who visited the London Science
Museum
declined.
Nevertheless
,
Vatican
museums had the highest increase in the
number
of
visitors
in 2015. Louvre had the biggest
number
of tourists in 1980, at around 8
million
, and it rose slightly to below 10
million
at the end
of the
period
.
Vatican
Art Gallery started the
period
at below 4
million
;
however
,
this
had the wildest fluctuation, with a massive jump to approximately 8
million
in 2015, meeting Louver
Museum
the
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same
number
of
visitors
. Meanwhile, the London Science
Museum
began with 4
million
visitors
,
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and decreased significantly to half that amount in 2015, which was 2
million
, the lowest
number
in any other
museum
. Shenzhen
Museum
remained relatively steady at the same
number
of
visitors
throughout the
period
, at around slightly less than 4
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, vatican, period, museum, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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