The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie charts provide a comparison of

proportion

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the proportion

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of contributions made by various industry

sectors

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to Turkey's economy over a 16-year period,from 2000 to 2016.

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, the most noticeable change is the agriculture sector, which held the largest share

initially

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then

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diclined

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declined

significantly.

Helthcare

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Healthcare

and education constituted the second-largest proportions and

remainded

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remained

consistent throughout the period. In 2000,

argiculture domainted

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agriculture dominated

the economy with a 24% contribution,

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in 2016,

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share dropped to 14%, representing the steepest decline among all other

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, manufacturing gained prominence, rising from 8% in 2000

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to 12% in 2016. Trade, utility and transportation

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also

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showed growth, increasing from 14% in 2000 to 16% contributions in 2016.

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government

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the government

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,Leisure and hospitality

sectors

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, despite declining, retained significant shares of 9% and 14%, respectively, in 2016. It is worth noting that growth in manufacturing, finance, business and others was consistent, rising by 3% over the period. Meanwhile,

sectors

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with stable contributions were healthcare and education, consistently accounting for 17% of the economy in both years.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Contribution
Percentage
Sector
Economy
Increase
Decrease
Stability
Significant
Notable
Trend
Period
Agriculture
Industry
Construction
Healthcare
Education
Trade
Utilities
Transportation
Finance
Business services

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The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?