the graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.
The line graph illustrates students who are likely to study three main global languages in 10-year
period
between 2020 and 2030.
Generally, what stands out from the graph is that the number of students has increased and it
will continue to rise. English is the most popular language by far.
looking at the details, as Add an article
the period
regard
to Change the form of the verb
regards
english
number of Change the capitalization
English
sudents
, it started at approximately 550 Correct your spelling
students
millions
, it has Change to singular
million
rised
gradually to 700 Correct your spelling
risen
raised
millions
in 2024, and it is predicted to reduce moderately Change to singular
million
the
following two years and go up sharply to nearly 750 Change preposition
in the
millions
, which Change to singular
million
is seem
to be the highest figure during the whole period Change the verb form
seem
mantioned
in the question. Samely, regarding Correct your spelling
mentioned
to
the figures of students Remove the preposition
apply
how
study Spanish, it was just under 200 Correct word choice
who
millions
in 2020, it has risen strikingly to 300 Change to singular
million
millions
Change to singular
million
at
2024, and it will hit a peak at just under 600 Change preposition
in
millions
in 2030.
As for the number of people Change to singular
million
how
Correct word choice
who
study
Add the particle
to study
Mandarian
, it started at 100 Correct your spelling
Mandarin
millions
in 2020, which was the lowest figure Change to singular
million
overal
. It has gone up steeply to 300 Correct your spelling
overall
millions
Change to singular
million
untill
2024, being as popular as Spanish which is likely to be the same the next year too. Correct your spelling
by
This
Change the determiner
These
numbers
Fix the agreement mistake
number
is
projected to improve Change the verb form
are
modestely
Correct your spelling
modestly
untill
2030.Correct your spelling
until
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