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Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart compares data about the proportion of 3 various transport systems namely, car, motorcycle, and bicycle among young generations of 4 different
countries
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 that are the UK, the USA,
France
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 and Italy for one year.
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, it is important that in all
countries
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 other than
France
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, the main transit is Bicycle, vehicle is the most common item.
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 the diagram, the Car, the main type of transportation in most
countries
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 especially Italian, hits nearly 75% of Italy's young inhabitants;
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 the USA' and the UK' yoth reach 60%; the
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 one is
France
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 with 40%. Bicycle is the most common method of travelling in
France
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 owing to the fact that it scores approximately 45% for the French and 30% for the British after that, American and Italian record almost the same percentage at 10%. The graph demonstrates that for Motorcycle the American reports the best fraction at 30%;
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, three other European
countries
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' nations touch roughly the same portion at 10%.

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