It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Tourism is considered
as
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one of the most profitable
industres
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industries
in the world.
However
, for some
holidays
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places
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this
industry has caused more damage that can not
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cover
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by the income
recived
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received
,
this
due
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to the lack of
travelers´consciusness
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travelers consciousness
that do not know how to behave when visiting other countries. The bad habit of
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littler
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litter
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on the streets is one of the most
usual
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complain
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for the locals.
Tourist
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do have the
resposability
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responsibility
to take care of
the
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own waste and as
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a consecuence
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consequence
consecuence
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the most visited
places
for holidays
ended
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up
at the end
of the day looking
as
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a disaster.
For instance
, beaches around the world are currently suffering
of
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waste pollution because people go there during the day and
forgot
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to take with them their rubbish,
as a
result
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the bottles of water or cans ended in the
waters
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water
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. Some of the possible
mensures
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measures
that could be taken
at
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with
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respect are the increment of security and rules.
This
can happen
putting
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in place
much
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more signs to create awareness, security cordons to delimitated prohibit areas and
surviliance
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surveillance
cameras to
recording
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offenders. In
this
way,
tourist
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tourists
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can think twice before
to damage
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the
places
and locals can be more open to
guess
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more
travelers
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travellers
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.
To conclude
, it is
importan
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important
to preserve cultural, historical and natural
places
used for
turist
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tourist
proposes
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purposes
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in the best way possible as they are an important part of our identity and when visiting other countries is
compusory
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compulsory
to respect the rules and
demostrate
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demonstrate
good behaviour.
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