The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing nuclear

power

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by using

uranium

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, there are

total

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a total

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six

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of six

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steps in

the

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apply

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nuclear

power

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generation, which

starts

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with the acquisition of

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uranium

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a uranium

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mine from

underground

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the underground

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world, and

ends

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end

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with

reuse

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or being buried. What can be seen in the first is

uranium

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ore extraction from the deep earth, specialize instruments are usually used. After that,

uranium

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ore is converted and enriched into U-235

fuel

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pellets, which is the only isotope in nature capable of controlled fission. During the third step, U-235

fuel

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is attributed to producing electricity in the

power

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station for lightning or other usages. By the way, there are large amounts of chemical gas emissions from

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stage. In terms of the duration

use

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of use

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which

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can

last

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approximately 4 years until the

fuel

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is consumed in great quantities and

then

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needing

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to be removed. Facing

this

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situation, some spent

fuel

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can be re-processed and

re-used

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reused

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by sending

they

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back to the

power

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station to handle with technical address.

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, some cannot be reprocessed

will

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and will

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be stored in containers and buried.(180)

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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, uranium, fuel with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nuclear fission
Radioactive material
Reactor core
Control rods
Coolant
Thermal energy
Steam generator
Turbine
Generator
Spent fuel
Radioactive waste
Depleted uranium
Decommissioning
Sustainable energy
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The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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