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The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides key information about the budgets that were allocated for roads and transport by various countries in the time ranging from 1990 to 2005. The units are measured in percentages.
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, it is clear from the graph that Portugal represents the highest ratios in the same mentioned years.
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, Italy's government spent the most
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2000,
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 the United Kingdom's budget was the lowest in the graph.
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 the data shown, Italian ratios fluctuated throughout the whole period, but they spent significantly in 2000, with almost 25% on roads and transport.
On the other hand
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, Portugal's spending rate was decreasing through the aforementioned period from approximately 27% in 1990
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 to 20% by 2005. In terms of the United Kingdom,
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 the substantial percentage was during the year
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2000, with above 10%,
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, their spending rate was the lowest compared to the other nations. The United States represented a modest 11% in 1990, but after 2000 it started to increase to 15%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratios" was used 2 times.
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