Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The usage of green
energy
is becoming a more economically better option to produce a
cost appealing
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source of
the
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energy
. In my
opinion
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opinion,
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it is the
better
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best
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way to produce
energy
resources in the entire world.As a matter of fact
that
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it helps in reducing global warming
furthermore
, The Government can provide
energy
to
their
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at
low
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a low
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cost.
Although
we have been relying on
othodox
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orthodox
unorthodox
methods to produce
energy
for a lot of period
and
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it resulted in causing global warming issues.
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, reproducing
energy
with the help of oil caused a lot of pollution,
as
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a consequence entire world faced the issue of melting glaciers and
therefore
,
it
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caused the issue of floods
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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