IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The graph illustrates the levels of production of the main types of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
Linking Words
,
It is clear that
Linking Words
Petroleum
Use synonyms
 and Natural gas
experiend
Correct your spelling
experienced
upward
Correct article usage
an upward
show examples
 trend, expected for coal
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
 the
period
Use synonyms
.
While
Linking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
Petroleum
Use synonyms
 was
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
 largest fossil
fuels
Fix the agreement mistake
fuel
show examples
 and coal became the lowest over the
period
Use synonyms
.
Petroleum
Use synonyms
 saw a significant
increased
Replace the word
increase
show examples
 at 100
tonnes
Use synonyms
 in 1981
abd
Correct your spelling
and
 1991,
however
Linking Words
, there was
Correct article usage
a descreased
show examples
descreased
Correct your spelling
decreased
 slightly.
Additionally
Linking Words
,
Petroleum
Use synonyms
 continued
rose
Change the verb form
to rise
show examples
 remarkably and hit the highest point of 140
tonnes
Use synonyms
 in the
last
Linking Words
 year.
In contrast
Linking Words
, Coal
remains
Wrong verb form
remained
show examples
 unchanged in the first year but started
fell
Change the verb form
to fall
show examples
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
 the same
period
Use synonyms
. These experienced a moderately downward trend and reached the bottom at 38
tonnes
Use synonyms
 in 2000. In terms of Natural gas, there was an upward trend over the
period
Use synonyms
. In 1981, natural gas saw a
dramtically
Correct your spelling
dramatically
boomed
Wrong verb form
boom
show examples
at
Change preposition
to
show examples
 80
tonnes
Use synonyms
 in 1996. In
addtion
Correct your spelling
addition
,
there
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
 still increased gradually
at
Change preposition
to
show examples
 100
tonnes
Use synonyms
 in 2000.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, period, tonnes with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
What to do next:
Look at other essays: