The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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give

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information about the population of New

zealand

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Zealand

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between 2011 and 2012

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age

group

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overall

Linking Words

, The 40-64 and 65+ groups

increaed

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increased

sharply,The under 15 and 15-39 groups decreased gradually.

Firstly

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, the 65+

group

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rising

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from 573,946 to 596,903 tallest in 4

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group

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groups

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but

population

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the population

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still

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at least. opposite, the 15-39

group

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gone

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down

shaprly

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sharply

from 1,557,256 to 1,574,102, the

numbers

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popuation

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population

salaries

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still at the largest

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

71 words

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The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?