Some people believe that tourists do not learn anything during their holidays, while others believe that they learn a lot. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often said that tourists can't achieve any knowledge during their vacation , whilst others argue and think the opposite of these beliefs.
This
essay agrees that tourists learn almost everything that they need as Linking Words
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people
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while
they visit other countries.
On the one hand , when individuals visit Linking Words
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new country it is impossible to not learn something. By living in Correct article usage
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such
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and by communicating with city residents , Correct article usage
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people
get more data about their culture , way of living and even their thinking.Use synonyms
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learned how to properly provide medical care to the wounded, Use synonyms
in addition
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, they adopted many useful skills that later helped in survival.
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On the other hand
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people
, it is Use synonyms
pleasure
to walk through the attractions knowing nothing about their origins and giving themselves a chance to guess. Add an article
a pleasure
For example
, there was an experiment about how our brain distinguishes our memories between those that Linking Words
person
will remember for a long time and those that will be easily forgotten. Correct article usage
a person
Therefore
, it showed that half of these memories that gave us enjoyment stayed unforgettable for many years.
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and it is not as difficult as many Change the spelling
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people
think, only the true desire of a person is important.Use synonyms
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