The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. Describe the information presented below. Comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
The diagram illustrates the number of
upaid
work hours per week done by married men and women.
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Overall
, it is evident that women had the highest average hours of unpaid work; whereas
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