Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

Nowadays, parents motivate their

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to indulge in various kinds of activities and doing a

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is one of them. The following essay will shed some light on the pros and cons of doing a

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. One notable advantage of encouraging

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to be

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about the importance of money.

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is because doing

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stage of life not only teaches them how valuable money is

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but

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prevents them from being a spendthrift.

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, the

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student will be able to manage their money because they know how

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hard to earn it. Another positive aspect of

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activity is

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children

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responsible

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.

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like a pizza boy,

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, teach the

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how the employer is dependent on them to run his business.

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, they do their work seriously and take complete responsibility.

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, every coin has two sides and despite all the advantages of a temporary

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, there are some disadvantages too.

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, it will disturb the

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regular

schedule of the

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. To illustrate, the students are already burdened with their own study schedule,

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, doing other jobs will affect their studies.

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, they will not be able to spend

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with their parents. To exemplify,

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will have to do work in the evening or night only after school hours.

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, they may not be able to spend any quality

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with their families. In conclusion, a part-

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has several

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beneficial and detrimental. On balance,

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, I tend to believe that parents should encourage their

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to do

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work as long as can manage their daily routine properly.