In spite of improvement in the healthcare by governments many people in developed countries are suffering from overweight and obesity. What are the causes of this and what other the impacts

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in

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rate, particularly in developed countries has become

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.

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the healthcare services in rich countries have increased dramatically, the

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rate has risen excessively, too.

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there are important factors toward

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issue, harmful impacts should be considered, which will be discussed. First of all,

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healthcare services in developed nations have been fostered over the years, the number of people who suffer from

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increased. there are two main vital reasons

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issue.

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, nowadays, many individuals have

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, which will lead to detrimental consequences

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as

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challenges.

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, consider a staff, who has a full-time job which requires sitting on a chair for a long period.

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, eating excessive fast food meals

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resulted in numerous challenges

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as

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, particularly among younger generations.

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, these kinds of reasons can contribute to harmful effects,

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as the

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in rates of

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.

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,

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harmful impacts on both individuals and societies. the most significant one is

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the

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in heart-attack diseases.

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,

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can inherently

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heart problems.

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, some individuals who suffer from the

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problems may feel a sense of isolation. A prime illustration of

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is an obese man who can not engage in physical activities with his peers,

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as running or playing volleyball,

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. In conclusion,

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healthcare programmes have been improved, across the globe, many people suffer from

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due to

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some important reasons

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as sedentary lifestyles.

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, these negative impacts can significantly result in physical and emotional problems

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as heart disease and feelings of isolation.