The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
The two pie charts compare the proportions of government investment across various sectors in 2010 and 2015, measured in percentages.
Overall
, education consistently represented the largest allocation of spending in both years, despite a slight decline by 2015. Linking Words
Additionally
, pensions and healthcare maintained relatively stable shares, Linking Words
while
welfare and interest on borrowing experienced notable increases. Linking Words
Conversely
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defence
showed a considerable reduction in expenditure.
In 2010, education accounted for the largest share of spending at 24%, followed closely by healthcare at 21% and pensions at 19%. Meanwhile, defence represented 17% of the budget. Spending on welfare amounted to 8%, Add an article
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whereas
interest on borrowing and transport received 3% and 5%, respectively. The culture and leisure and other categories comprised the smallest portions, at 2% and 1%.
By 2015, outlay patterns shifted slightly. Spending on education declined moderately to 21%, Linking Words
while
healthcare decreased marginally to 20%. Pensions remained unchanged at 19%. Welfare spending increased substantially, rising from 8% to 13%, and interest on borrowing doubled to 10%, marking the most significant growth across all sectors. Linking Words
Similarly
, transport expenditure rose to 13%, a modest increase of 3%. Linking Words
In contrast
, defence spending dropped by 3 percentage points to 14%. Linking Words
Finally
, allocations for culture and leisure (2%) and the other category (1%) remained static.Linking Words
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