The diagrams below show an island before and after the addition of tourist facilities. Summarise the information in the maps and make comparisons where appropriate.

The diagrams below show an island before and after the addition of tourist

facilities.

Summarise the information in the maps and make comparisons where

appropriate.
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The diagram shows an
island
that is
approximately 900 meters wide and 300 meters across before and after its development into a tourist resort. Before being developed the
island
was unpopulated apart from a few palm trees and had a beach on the northwest side of the
island
. After development, the
island
has a pier and reception centre built on its southern shore.
In addition
, a number of small sailing boats are available for transport or leisure. On the western side of the pier and reception centre is a small park that
also
overlooks the sea. On the opposite (north) side of the
island
is a combined restaurant and leisure centre. On the western end of the
island
are 8 huts that are close to the beach and surrounded by trees. The eastern end of the
island
is protected by trees and contains a group of six huts and a children’s playground.
This
area allows family groups and couples to have separate areas so they do not disturb each other.
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