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13. You recently assigned a contract of your home painting. The work is over but you are not satisfied with quality of work. Write a letter to the contractor for the same. In your letter • describe what you are not satisfied with • say what you want the contractor to do and your action plan • say what was good a bout the service

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with the quality of your service. Your team has recently painted my house and the
color
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 of
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 is definitely not what we discussed.I believe you are the person in charge to
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 my concern. Before the work started, I showed them a few samples and we decided to go with light blue.
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, the true shade of
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 turned out to be darker than what we agreed on. The reason why I wanted that tone is it feels the space brighter and larger and the current shade has a quiet opposite effect. I would like to get a full refund or your team to redo the painting.
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, apart from
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,
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everything
 else went well. Your masters were always on time and finished the job within
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agreed upon
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 duration. I will certainly mention
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 in my review. I have sent the
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 samples via email in case you would like to investigate it
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. Please let me know what steps you are willing to take to resolve the issue as soon as possible. Thanks in advance. Best regards, Laman
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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