You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter give the details of the flight explain what the problem with the food was say what the airline should do about it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I recently flew in your airline. My

flight

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number was PK212, and It was flying from the Lahore airport to

the

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Dubai.

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, my seat number was 28[c];

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, It was a

three hours

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three-hour

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flight

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. I am writing

this

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letter to let you know that the food I

pre booked

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for my

flight

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was not cooked.

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, I

mentioned

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asked you

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to serve me a vegan meal , but my request was neglected. I am certainly, not satisfied with

this

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service. Though I want my refund for the special request I made, and as a of fact, I need to get a free access lounge on my return

flight

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compensation. I am looking forward to your concern regarding

this

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matter. Thanks. Yours faithfully. Umar.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

130 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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