Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed
Today, more individuals tend to
work
for themselves, Use synonyms
instead
of having a boss or mentor. It seems to be because of independent Linking Words
work
without controlling by others and pursuing a passion. Use synonyms
However
, the irregular salary and lack of company benefits, Linking Words
such
as health insurance and pensions, are the main drawbacks of Linking Words
this
statement.
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people
prefer being self-employed Use synonyms
due to
the fact that they are independent, and they enjoy Linking Words
this
way. Linking Words
People
who Use synonyms
work
for themselves have no bosses and no one can force them in their job, giving tasks. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they are leaders themselves and can make their own convenient schedule of Linking Words
job
, which may ease their independent Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
work
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in Kazakhstan, basic employees in governmental companies Linking Words
work
approximately 45 hours per week, from Monday to Friday; but, self-employed individuals have the freedom to Use synonyms
work
whenever and wherever. Use synonyms
In addition
, one of the reasons for self-employment is a passion for doing something. If there is some activity Linking Words
such
as playing footballLinking Words
,
or creating Remove the comma
apply
own
business, many Correct pronoun usage
their own
people
tend to choose Use synonyms
this
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due to
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passion and love.
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On the other hand
, having an unstable salary and a dearth of benefits, Linking Words
such
as pensions, and health insurance, may negatively affect self-employees. Most self-employed business Linking Words
people
are not able to earn the same amount of money every month or year, which can lead to high risks Use synonyms
such
as bankruptcy; Linking Words
thus
it may affect their business production, leaving them without money. Linking Words
Moreover
, independent workers cannot be gifted with company perks. To give a clear example, in great powers, Linking Words
such
as the UK, the US and China, a large number of organisations provide health insurance, pensionsLinking Words
and
cash advances and bonuses to keep their workers motivated and disciplined during their worktime. Correct word choice
apply
However
, self-employed Linking Words
people
cannot have these opportunities, which means they should make their own perks, which is a waste of money.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
many prefer to Linking Words
work
independently and have some freedom in terms of their job, it can have some disadvantages Use synonyms
such
as unstable salaries and paucity of perks provided by public-industry companies.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...