You have recently moved to a new place and haven't got a chance to tell your friend.write a letter to your friend. Where and why you move from there? Compare your new place with old. Where do you live now?

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
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letter to let you know that I recently got myself a new
place
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and I shifted to my new
place
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in urgency that I did not get a chance to let you know. I got myself
this
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new
place
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in, (Defense housing scheme) and the main reason for me to move in here is because
,
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this
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place
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is close to my office.
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, I got rid
from
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the traffic issue. As a matter of
fact
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I can now go to my office, on my feet. My new
house
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is big
as
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with five bedrooms, as
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to my old
place
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.
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Furthermore
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My new
house
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has a beautiful garden and you know that my old
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house
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garden was very small. My new
place
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is close to the main canal road, and my
house
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number is 24d, Block A. It is only a
ten minutes
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drive from your
house
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. I hope you will love
this
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place
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too and I need you to come to look at it. Yours
sincerly
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sincerely
, Umar.
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