A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Mr. Kingston, I am Krishna from 34, church street, west Austria. Recently, I heard news of fundraising for your article. I will contribute an amount for the

book

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which is influenced more. And I would to share my personal experience through

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letter. I recently read your “SKY BLUE” article a month

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is really awesome because I enjoyed it a lot

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studying. Especially, chapter 4 which was quite more interesting.

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book

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has influenced me more and something is connecting to my personal life so I love to read your magazines.

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shows the best ways to live and how to survive for a life. Particularly, the protagonist who is the character I really enjoyed.

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the main portion is the ending part that I felt very good and complete satisfaction. I would recommend you to publish the

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widely or else take a future film, these would

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many

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lives in a positive way I hope

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will help you more and I am waiting for your valuable feedback. Yours faithfully, KRISHNA MOORTHY

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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182 words

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