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In the past, photography was used to real people and places; however, because of technology, today you cannot trust what you see. Is it a negative or positive aspect of development?

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Nowadays, the wide spread of the
use
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technology
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particulary
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particularly
 in the field of
photography
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, has become controversial.
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, some governments are making efforts in order to adapt
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 to current days,
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 the fact that old rules
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 to control the new issues that
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, positive aspects can be highlighted from the application of "photoshop" and similar tools that I will describe in
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, the cinema industry, just to give an example, has greatly profited
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, the huge amount of printed material that used to be
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 in the past before the "perfect picture" was achieved, today has been replaced with several "digital shots", that can be retouched as many times as the
photography
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 director deserves.
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,
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time
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professionals
 involved in the "big screen industry", but it has
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 too a great contribution to the care of our planet.
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, the incorrect
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 caused devastating effects. An example of
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 is the increasing amount of demands against people who
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technology
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 to change real pictures of individuals and
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,
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 material to blackmail them. Indeed,
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 trend has sadly spread mainly in schools, where many students take pictures of their classmates and
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, after changing the real shots by IA, make them appear,
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, naked. I strongly think that in
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 not
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 the prohibition of the
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technology
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 the right education and
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conscientization
concentration
 of parents and children about
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 topic. In conclusion, the right
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, will determine whether or not its
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employment
 is appropriate.
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, in my opinion, the main issue to be considered is not the advanced technological tools available in the market, but the legal and ethical criteria applied when modifying a picture.
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, the emphasis should be
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 moral aspects and education, rather than
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 regulating the
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tech tools
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 or
apliccations
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applications
application
, that, from my point of view, when well-used, can be very convenient.

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