The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked rvisitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of a questionnaire that required visitors to the Parkway Hotel
how
they showed the hotel's customers by 5 levels of rating in 2005 and 2010.
Correct word choice
and how
Overall
, every section in the pie chart below shows a sudden changes
between two different years. Correct the article-noun agreement
sudden changes
a sudden change
Also
, satisfactory was the highest figure in 2005, after that, good choice became the most rated in 2010. at the same time, Excellent was the lowest in 2005. and edited to very poor in 2010.
To begin
with, the excellent part was 5 per cent in 2005. but, it's about six times higher than in 2010. in addition
, the good grade started in
14% and increased to 39% to Change preposition
at
became
the highest rate in 2010. Wrong verb form
become
Furthermore
, both poor and very poor departments decreased from 21% to 12% for poor. while
very poor was 15% in 2005 and changed to 4% in 2010. Moreover
, the Replace the word
satisfaction
satisfactory
part was higher than others in the first year of Replace the word
satisfaction
this
questionnaire. after 5 years. it decreased to 17%Submitted by kalmah.sa20 on
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