You have visited another city in your country. Prior to the visit you requested some information from a tourist centre, but the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the manager of the centre and say - What information were you looking for? - What was incorrect in it? - What happened to you because of it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
you
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to express my dissatisfaction
from
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a tourist
centre
. Actually, I wanted to gather some information about
guelph
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city but later I found it was
inncorrect
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incorrect
. I called in tourist
centre
to gain valuable information about
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the beautiful
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village of
guelph
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that I was going to
visited
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next month on my birthday. On the base of
information
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the information
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I got from
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the tourist
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centre
, I booked my tickets for
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the hotel
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hotel
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nearby
location
provided by
visitors
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the visitors
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centre
. They gave different
location
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but the village is in
other
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another
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location
. Later on, when I discussed
with
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it with
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my
freind
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friend
he told me that
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is
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inncorrect
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incorrect
because he visited
guelph
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village before me. So,
I
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because of
this
innconsistency
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inconsistency
I
losted
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lost
my money by booking
wrong
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the wrong
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hotel. As a solution, I would suggest that I want
full
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refund
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my money. Thank you for considering my request. Yours faithfully, Suman
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