The charts below show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1994, 2004 and 2013.

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compares the sales of new

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models

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in Australia,

sedans

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SUVs

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and other

car

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models

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in three years, 1994,2004 and 2013.

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it is clear that

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the

best selling

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car

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models

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were

sedans

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whereas

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the

least selling

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one

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were

SUVs

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in three years. As the chart shows, the most

selling

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car

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were

sedans

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with 74%,

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the least sold

models

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were

SUVs

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in 1994. 19% of all

cars

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were sold for other

cars

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. The total selling

car

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models

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were 42900 in 1994. In 2004

sedans

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were sold more than

SUVs

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, 62% and 17%, respectively. The other

car

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models

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were sold

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%. The total selling

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car

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cars

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in 2004

were

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71000. The next year was 2013. In 2013 other

car

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models

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were sold less than

sedans

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, 32% and 51%, respectively. 17% of total

cars

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were sold

SUVs

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in 2013. The total selling

cars

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were

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85000 in 2013. The best selling

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in 2013 with 85000 sold

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models

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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158 words

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The charts below show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1994, 2004 and 2013.

"Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"

You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: 1. Say that you liked their photos of your family 2. Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event. 3. Give them the details of the event.

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We cannot help everyone in the world who needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are the best at or they are most interested in. To what extent do you agree?