The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart below depicts the weekly
income’s
distribution of families in one country on the various types of living things in 1968 and in 2018. At first glance, the vertical Change noun form
income
collumn
gives information about many things that Correct your spelling
column
family
spent on, Correct article usage
the family
while
the horrizontal
shows the percentage of weekly income. Correct your spelling
horizontal
Overall
, food
in the past achieved the highest proportions, on which families spent most of their weekly income while
five decades later, leisure surpassed any types
to Fix the agreement mistake
type
achievd
the highest position.
In 1968, Correct your spelling
achieve
achieved
food
was the sources
of living Fix the agreement mistake
source
need
Fix the agreement mistake
needs
which
most Correct word choice
and
of
families spent almost all of their income. With 35%, Change preposition
apply
food
was much more
higher than the others, about seven times as much as the lowest thing, which is fuel and power. Other types of families’ spending including housing, clothing and Change the word
apply
footware
, household goods, personal goods, transport, Correct your spelling
footwear
leisure
reached virtually the same proportion with about 10 Correct word choice
and leisure
percents
.
Over the next 5 decades, Fix the agreement mistake
percent
food
was still a high demand, but it was a bit lower than leisure activities. With over 20 percents
, the entertainment activities surpassed Fix the agreement mistake
percent
food
as well as
housing, about 5 percents
higher than in the past. Transport Fix the agreement mistake
percent
also
reached a much higher percent
, about over 5 Replace the word
percentage
percents
higher than in 1968. The others still remained low, and almost Fix the agreement mistake
percent
unchange
with under 10 Correct your spelling
unchanged
percents
.
It can be seen that people tend to improve their living by spending more on many activities and things that are Fix the agreement mistake
percent
relevanted
to relaxation.Correct your spelling
relevant
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