Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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our life. Having

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problem

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can lead to many

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for us.

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, nowadays,

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globalization, more and more

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individuals

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problem

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in the method which is

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the

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alternative

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medicines

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and

treatment

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to save their

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instead

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of going to their usual and reliable

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to

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treat

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my view,

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thinking

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wrong,

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is a negative development.

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deeper analysis, people

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trying

alternative

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medicine

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and

treatment

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can not know exactly about their

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issue

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to have a suitable

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.

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,

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doctor

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who have an enormous knowledge

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science are reliable than any

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or

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treatments

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. When visiting

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doctor

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we can know more about the problems and the way to

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, but with only

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alternative

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medicin

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medicine

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we have no information about our

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issue

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issues

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and don’t know how to

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them.

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, when my mom was young, she believed that her headache was not dangerous and she just

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a small

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the next day, her head

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really hurt and she

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to her

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immediately

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treat

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. After that occasion, all of her problems, she was

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to her

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to have the best

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is why we

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believe in

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rather than any

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or

treatment

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,

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medicines

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and

treatments

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have many

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. As we don’t have any information about our problem

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the way we choose

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to solve

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not

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use

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the right

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and

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suitable for our body, we will be in danger.

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, a patient in my

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hospital, in the past

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used

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alternative

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medicine

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then

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, he

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to go to

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to visit

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doctor

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to

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treat

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situation was really dangerous. So that

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visiting

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more

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better than

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by

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ourselves

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. In conclusion, in our modern era,

instead

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of believing in

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medicine

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and

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, we should choose to visit our usual

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. The reason

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visiting

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doctor

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help

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us to know more about our

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and the method to

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, to have a

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way, so that we should believe in

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doctor

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, spending time

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doctor

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instead

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of

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use

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any

alternative

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medicines

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and

treatments

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which are not safe for our

health

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.