The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above provides information about how
plastic
bottles are recycled into new products.
The first stage of the process is when individuals place their rubbish in the trash bin before it is loaded onto garbage trucks in order to be sent to the recycling centre. After transportation to the recycling centre, the plastic
bottles are sorted by hand. Then
, they are compressed tightly to form blocks, and they are subsequently
crushed into smaller pieces. Having been washed, the pieces of plastic
are poured into a machine that turns them into pellets. Next,
the pellets are heated in order to create a raw material that can be used to manufacture products ranging from clothes, bags, and bottles to containers and pencils.
In summary, the process of plastic
recycling is a closed-loop process that starts from sorting plastic
garbage, processing it, and eventually reproducing it to make new items.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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