The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide information about the three most popular
fast-food
restaurants among teenagers
in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and their predictions for 2027.
Overall
, in Vietnam, except for Burger
King, the numbers
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number
people
who prefer KFC
and McDonald
's will increase
in 2027. However
, the numbers
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number
teenagers
who like McDonald
's and Burger
King will decrease. Notably, McDonald
's will be the most popular in 2027 in both countries.
In Vietnam, more than half of the young population ate their fast-food
meals
at Burger
King; however
, this
percentage
will decrease slightly to 39% in 2027. On the other hand
, the percentage
of people
who preferred McDonald
's was 43.1%, and this
will increase
to 57.4%, the highest percentage
among the other fast-food
restaurants. Additionally
, KFC
was the least popular fast-food
place, at only around 4.1%, and it will increase
slightly to 6.3%.
Meanwhile, the majority of Indonesian teenagers
in 2017 liked to eat their fast-food
meals
at McDonald
's, which accounted for 60.8%; however
, this
will fall to 48.5% after ten years. The percentage
of people
who ate their meals
at KFC
will have the largest fluctuation, increasing from 23.8% to approximately 39% in 2027. Despite this
increase
in the number of people
who prefer KFC
, McDonald
's will still be the most common fast-food
restaurant in 2027. Finally
, the percentage
of teenagers
who ate their meals
at Burger
King will fall marginally from 15.4% to 12.3%.Submitted by zuhrakhirie1997 on
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