The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide information about the three most popular
fast-food
restaurants among
teenagers
in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and their predictions for 2027.
Overall
, in Vietnam, except for
Burger
King, the
numbers
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number
show examples
of
people
who prefer
KFC
and
McDonald
's will
increase
in 2027.
However
, the
numbers
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number
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of Indonesian
teenagers
who like
McDonald
's and
Burger
King will decrease. Notably,
McDonald
's will be the most popular in 2027 in both countries. In Vietnam, more than half of the young population ate their
fast-food
meals
at
Burger
King;
however
,
this
percentage
will decrease slightly to 39% in 2027.
On the other hand
, the
percentage
of
people
who preferred
McDonald
's was 43.1%, and
this
will
increase
to 57.4%, the highest
percentage
among the other
fast-food
restaurants.
Additionally
,
KFC
was the least popular
fast-food
place, at only around 4.1%, and it will
increase
slightly to 6.3%. Meanwhile, the majority of Indonesian
teenagers
in 2017 liked to eat their
fast-food
meals
at
McDonald
's, which accounted for 60.8%;
however
,
this
will fall to 48.5% after ten years. The
percentage
of
people
who ate their
meals
at
KFC
will have the largest fluctuation, increasing from 23.8% to approximately 39% in 2027. Despite
this
increase
in the number of
people
who prefer
KFC
,
McDonald
's will still be the most common
fast-food
restaurant in 2027.
Finally
, the
percentage
of
teenagers
who ate their
meals
at
Burger
King will fall marginally from 15.4% to 12.3%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fast-food, teenagers, burger, people, kfc, mcdonald, increase, meals, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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