You have an upcoming meeting with your manager to discuss your performance in the past years. write a letter to the manager. In your letter. Describe your achievements in the past year. Say what areas/skills need to improve on Suggest plan to improve those skills/areas.

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to remind you

with

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an upcoming meeting with

regards

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to my performance in the past years that I have been working with the company. By holding the position as a supervisor I have gained a lot of experience and even guided my team to work in the desired position and

as a result

surpassing the goals of the company.

However

, there are certain areas that I need to work on. I am an introvert by nature and sometimes becomes very difficult to point out the

member

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of my team.

Furthemore

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Furthermore

, I need to improve my sales ability in order to advertise and

sale

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the products of the company. I will work on

my

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areas that I lack. I will make sure that if there is any mistake

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ny

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by

my team member I will let

then

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know and

this

will enhance their

peformance

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performance

. I will look forward to

hear

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from you soon. Yours friendly, Harshalika Singh