You have visited another city in your country. Prior to the visit you requested some information from a tourist centre, but the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the manager of the centre and say - What information were you looking for? - What was incorrect in it? - What happened to you because of it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter via email to inform you
my
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dissatisfaction with the disinformation your office sent, which caused a lot of problems during our visit to the city of
Melborn
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Melbourne
.
Firstly
, we planned to visit the sightseeing places
according to
the knowledge received by your office staff,
such
as the exact addresses, their maps, the access ways, and the timetable of opening and closing of them, the transportation services offered by the reserved hotel and many other coordinating that was affected by a simple mistake. Unfortunately, the leading cause of
this
problem was a simple misunderstanding that an inexperienced member of your staff established, unbelievably, the similarity of the name and surname of another client changed our situation together. the destination of the other client was Sydney, and from our bad luck, the names of our hotels were
also
the same. In any case, all our plan was changed, including the time, the
adresses
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addresses
, and so on.
Hence
, we lost a lot of time and
also
missed many places of interest. Anyway, it took so much effort to fix these mistakes. I am looking forward to hearing a suitable response to compensate for the damages incurred. Yours sincerely Tomas Howkins
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