The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by British Citizens. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by British Citizens. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of prices in 7 various categories by British Citizens namely ;food,cars,petrol,restaurants,furniture ,computers
as well as
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books from 1966 to 1996 .The items are measured in percentage .
Overall
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,there are two trends in the pie chart: upward and downward .Between 1966 and 1996 there was a sharp decline in food and book costs ,
while
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the ratio for cars ,restaurants and computers increased dramatically . In 1966 , food showed the highest percentage of prices at 44% ,
whereas
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this
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figure dropped sharply to 14% in 1996 .
By contrast
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, car costs were very low 23% in 1966 and
this
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level increased sharply to 45% in 1996.The fee of restaurants increases twofold between 1966 and 1996 ,from 7% to 14% ,respectively. The remaining three categories showed only slight differences as furniture ,petrol
as well as
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books indicators were nearly the same over a period of 3 decades.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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