The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph provides the total
foreigners
who visited the three places in a European country in 1987 and 2007. Correct quantifier usage
number of foreigners
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of Linking Words
oversea
Fix the agreement mistake
overseas
visitors
to the lakes and the Use synonyms
coast
increased quite steeply, Use synonyms
while
those who came to the Linking Words
mountains
saw a modest increase.
Looking in more detail, in 1987, the Use synonyms
coast
had approximately 40,000 Use synonyms
visitors
compared to 20,000 for the Use synonyms
mountains
and 10,000 for the lakes. Use synonyms
However
, after 5 years, the number of people who travelled to the Linking Words
coast
decreased slightly to 35,000, but Use synonyms
rebounding
during the rest of the period, reaching 75,000 people in 2007. Wrong verb form
rebounded
On the other hand
, from 1987 to 1997, the portion of foreigners who travelled to the Linking Words
mountains
climbed insignificantly, with a 10,000 increase. Use synonyms
This
was followed by a minor upward of 500 more Linking Words
visitors
in 2007.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, the lakes's Linking Words
visitors
soared beginning in 1997, reaching a total of 40,000 after surpassing the Use synonyms
mountains
' Use synonyms
visitors
in 1992. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
figure continued to climb, overtaking the Linking Words
coast
and reaching a peak of 75,000 in 2002, before dropping Use synonyms
quitely
in 2007 to 50,000 people.Correct your spelling
quite
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, coast, mountains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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