WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the average proportion of
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
in typically everyday dishes in the United States, which are these
nutrients Correct determiner usage
apply
might
be unhealthyCorrect pronoun usage
that might
,
if Remove the comma
apply
it
eaten excessively.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, the highest percentage
of sodium
and saturated fat found
mostly in dinner Add a missing verb
is found
meals
, while
snacks have a huge amount
of added sugar
. Breakfast and lunch meals
have all
nearly the same Correct determiner usage
apply
amount
of three nutrients.
Initially
, dinner meals
have the largest percentage
of sodium
and saturated fat among other dishes with 43 per cent and 37 per cent respectively, whilst have
23 per cent of Wrong verb form
having
sugar
added. Snacks have a significant number of added sugar
nearly 42% and
Correct your spelling
an
amount
of fat at 21% and small
Add an article
a small
percentage
of sodium
which is 14%.
Secondly
, lunch meals
have almost the same amount
of sodium
and fat which are 29% sodium
and 26% fat, meanwhile having 19% of added sugar
. For breakfast
it is discovered that all three nutrients have the same Add a comma
breakfast,
percentage
16% for sodium
and added sugar
, and 14% for sodium
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, percentage, meals, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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