The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This
bar chart illustrates the labor force employemnet
of Correct your spelling
employment
USA
from 1930 to 2010. There were mentioned five sectors Correct article usage
the USA
which
employees worked.
Change preposition
in which
Overall
, farming
,fishing and foresting Correct article usage
the farming
sector
sharply declined Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
while
other categories were increase
. Specially technical and industrial sections notably increase from 1970.
Wrong verb form
increased
Initially
, farming fishing and foresting reached a peak of 80% but it was
sharply declined in 1980 and Unnecessary verb
apply
end
of the 2010 which Change preposition
at end
was
declinedUnnecessary verb
apply
0
. Industrial and technical Change preposition
to 0
employement
Correct your spelling
employment
remain
constant both categories gradually increased and it Change the verb form
remains
was
peak 35% by 2010.
Sales and office Verb problem
peaked
flucations
all over the year.Beginning of the year, other services Correct your spelling
fluctuations
locations
were
dropped slightly but middle of the year Unnecessary verb
apply
which was
Verb problem
they
remain
constant.Wrong verb form
remained
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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