The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flow chart identifies the process of how
sugar
are
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made from
sugar
cane. There are several different stages undertaken in order to produce
a
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good quality
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sugar
. These include crushing, evaporating, drying and cooling. The first stage of the process begins when the
sugar
cane is grown after 12 to 18 months of planting. Having been grown, they are harvested either
hand picked
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or by using a tractor. Those that are collected are
then
crushed using a machine and turned into
a
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juice.
Next
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the juice is purified with a limestone filter and evaporated in order to become a syrup. Later, the syrup is centrifuged so that the
sugar
crystals are separated from the syrup.
Finally
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they are dried and cooled to become
sugar
. In conclusion, the process of making
sugar
ensures that
sugar
cane is crushed, evaporated at a certain heat and dried and cooled so that it turns into 
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sugar
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sugar
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mature
  • harvest
  • extract
  • purification
  • impurities
  • evaporation
  • thick syrup
  • crystallization
  • centrifugation
  • molasses
  • raw sugar crystals
  • refinement
  • purify
  • whiten
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