The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports of three areas from 1985 to 1990. Write some sentences to describe the line graph.

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The line graph compares the

wheat

exports of three

region

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regions

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Australia

Canada

, and the

European

Community

from 1985 to 1990

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Overall

overall

while

the

wheat

export

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exports

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Canada

and the

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European

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european

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European

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community

fluctuations ,

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Australia

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australia

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Australian

export

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exports

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decreased

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deceased

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decreased

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steadily in the period start in 1985

Canada

export

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exported

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wheat

the largest up to 19

millions

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million

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tonnes

continuses

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continues

continuous

it is

european

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European

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community

at approximately 17

millions

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million

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tonnes

However

Australia

export

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exports

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wheat

lowest about 15

millions

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million

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tonnes

. by 1986

Canada

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Canada's

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exports decreased slightly to 17

millions

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million

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tonnes

.Next

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apply

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European

community

reduced slightly to about 13 million

tonnes

Meanwhile

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the 2 regions decreased

then

Australia

increased slightly about 17

millions

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million

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tonnes

Between 1987 and 1988 ,

Canada

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Canada's

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export

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exported

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wheat

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apply

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skyrocket notable to 25

millions

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million

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tonnes

however

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however,

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European

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european

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European

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community

remained constant

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at 15

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million

millions

millons

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million

tonnes

meanwhile

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Australia

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australia

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australia's

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export

wheat

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of wheat

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hit a bottom

over

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of over

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millions

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million

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tonnes

by 1950

insummary

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in summary

summary

Canada

wheat

exports

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exported

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millions

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million

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tonnes

in 1990

while

australia

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Australia

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showed a

consisten

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consistent

decline .

the

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The European

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european

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European

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drop

dropped

dropp

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dropped

slightly but

move

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moved

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up clearly

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, australia, canada, european, community, export, millions, tonnes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
8
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
47
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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