A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jatinder Kaur and

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m living

in

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oak street

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london

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London

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. I am going to express

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my

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concerns

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about how

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constructing the new factory would be

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bad for the people who

are

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living

over

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there for a long time. The new factory is going to

built

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in

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next month in our residential area. I think constructing

of

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the new building may

be creates

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new problems for

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society . There will be a lot of noise level

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that people may face hearing problem as

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everyone knows a lot of noise pollution

is emerged

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from the factories.

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, air pollution

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land pollution may be generated because of

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it. Society may

be faced

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health risks as it

creates

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a

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apply

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emit

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gases. I would like the local council should think one more

on

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about

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the decision which is made by them before starting

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the work.

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,

factory

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factories

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can be made by them in that area in which people are not living.

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hope you will try to

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our voice and action will be taken from your side. With regards, Jatinder Kaur.