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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jatinder Kaur and
i
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 m living
in
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 115
oak street
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london
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. I am going to express
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 concerns
how
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 constructing the new factory would be
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bad for the people who
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 living
over
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there for a long time. The new factory is going to
built
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in
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next month in our residential area. I think constructing
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the new building may
be creates
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 new problems for
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society . There will be a lot of noise level
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 that people may face hearing problem as
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 everyone knows a lot of noise pollution
is emerged
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 from the factories.
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, air pollution
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 land pollution may be generated because of
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it. Society may
be faced
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 health risks as it
creates
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a
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emit
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 gases. I would like the local council should think one more
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the decision which is made by them before starting
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the work.
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factory
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 can be made by them in that area in which people are not living.
i
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 hope you will try to
listen
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 our voice and action will be taken from your side. With regards, Jatinder Kaur.

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