The chart below gives information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 to 2000 and the marital status of the adult American in two of the years
The given bar charts
illustrates
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illustrate
number
of marriages and divorces in America during the period of 30 years, and the marital status of elderly citizens in 1970 and 2000. Change the article
a number
the number
Overall
, it is clear from the figure that, in 1970 Correct article usage
the statistic
statistic
of marriages Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
was
significantly high 2.5 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
millions
, when Change to singular
million
index
of divorces was the lowest, representing 1 million. The highest Add an article
the index
percentages
of adults was 70% in 1970, meanwhile the indicator of divorced Americans was approximately 3%.Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
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