There is no doubt that learning a foreign
is not easy.
some people believe that knowing another
is just for travelling or living in another
, others argue that there are other benefits in acquiring another
skills. In
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of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.
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learning
is for effective
. If we are only staying in our own
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with each other.
, it is not necessary to be trained in a foreign
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different
.
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, if we are only staying in our community, there is no chance to practise the other
that we learn.
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may get forgotten after some time.
, in England, most people learned a second
in secondary school,
as German or Spanish, but most people would forget the
after a
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in our daily lives.
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but
for learning different
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.
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time living in our own
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surrounding us every
. To illustrate
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of cuisines and restaurants that we may visit in our community would be the most obvious
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in our daily lives. There is an advantage of learning a little
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knowing what you can order from a restaurant.
, ‘pollo’ means chicken in
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restaurant.
, I believe that learning foreign
is not only for travelling or living in another
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because of globalization.
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the purpose of learning another
, whether it’s for travelling or other reasons. In my opinion, learning different
is not only for
but
for understanding other cultures for broadening one’s horizons.