Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrate Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event. - Suggest a suitable venue - Make recommendation as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band etc
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Dear John,
Hope you're doing well
!.
I got your letter and I'm glad that you need my suggestions to make your birthday memorable.
Well! Change the punctuation
!
according to
me, you should organise a themed party
. The theme of the party
should be bollywood
style. People can dress up like their favourite Change the capitalization
Bollywood
celebritires
and actors Correct your spelling
celebrities
to
whom they admire. It will give Change preposition
apply
more
Correct article usage
a more
energentic
environment to your birthday. Plus, people will enjoy it because it will be a new idea for all.
Now the question is where will you host the Correct your spelling
energetic
party
? I know a place
near to your area, they have a sitting
arrangement of 50 people Correct your spelling
seating
also
their food is delicious. Last
month, I visited to
Remove the preposition
apply
this
place
with my another friends
and from that day it Replace the adjective
another friend
other friends
become
my favourite Wrong verb form
became
place
. Hopefully, you will also
like the venue. The name of the restaurant is Red Restaurant. You can have a look on
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at
this
onces
.
To make your Correct your spelling
once
party
more enjoyable we can add a component of music. We can request party
Correct article usage
a party
place
to arrange best
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the best
Dj
for us. I'm sure they might have Correct your spelling
DJ
there
own too.
I hope you will like my ideas. Excited to meet you soon.
With love,
WarisCorrect your spelling
their
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,