The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts represent the
inforamtion
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information
of
of revenue Change preposition
apply
sevices
and expenses in the Correct your spelling
services
united states
in Correct your spelling
United States
same
year.
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the same
Firstly
, the largest proportion is covered by donated food Linking Words
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that
is 86.6% in the left side chart followed by 10.4% Correct pronoun usage
which
society
involvement and program revenue is 2.2 per cent. Change preposition
of society
Moreover
, investment money and politics deposit Linking Words
is
being provided in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
similar
amount and 0.4% seems in other income as well.
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a similar
On the other hand
, in expenditures the significant area is being covered by program sources Linking Words
such
as 95.8 % characterized by fundraising Linking Words
2.6
per cent and only Change preposition
at 2.6
paticipation
of management and general is 1.6%.
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participation
overall
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in
both sides the noticeable area of contribution to donated food and Change preposition
on
programe
service, Correct your spelling
programme
while
a minimal is being given by government grants and investment income.Linking Words
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