You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your boss about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work and how long you need explain how you will keep up-to-date while you are away suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Mr. John, Hope you are doing well! I am writing
this
letter to request for
vacations
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in the
last
week of December. There are
few
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a few
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reasons why I
requires
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time
off from work.
Firsly
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Firstly
, I have not
utilise
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my vacation period, for me
this
is
a
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best
time
.
Secondly
, I wanted to meet my parents who are
in
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back home. They are insisting me to come home to spend some quality
time
with them. I have not
met
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them
from
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last
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three years, it is quite a long
time
for them. As I know, I am an accountant and my job duties
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up-to-date information about clients and business. I understand you will be worried about
this
. Sir, I will ensure you that I will access my Gmail emails and company emails daily. I will keep in touch with staff members so that I do not miss any latest instructions.
Additionally
, I will devote part-
time
hours toward my work
while
I
will be
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on
vacations
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.
Also
, other staff members are ready to assist me during
this
tenure. I will guide them whenever
neccessary
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necessary
. Hopefully, you will grant permission to my request. Yours faithfully, Kanchan Bhatia
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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