The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
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The chart illustrates how many
production
and
consumption
of
electricity
in ten different countries (China, United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea) in 2014.
Overall
, the majority of
consumption
and
production
of
electricity
in China.
On the other hand
the least of using and producing electric energy in Korea in one year. The number of using and producing
electricity
in China with little difference is around 5,398 in
production
and around 5,322
kWh
in
consumption
. Followed by the US has the highest both of producing and
consumption
the electric power around 4,099
kWh
in making electrical power and around 3,866
kWh
citizens of the US used
electricity
in 2014.
Furthermore
, other countries
such
as Russia, Japan, and India have around 1,057-871
kWh
in the
production
of
electricity
while
for
consumption
the energy of
electricity
is around 1,038-698
kWh
.
Moreover
, the proportion of producing and using electric power in Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany is a little different with around 618-526
kWh
in making
electricity
and using
electricity
around 462-582
kWh
.
In addition
, the lowest
production
is around 485,1
kWh
and
consumption
is around 449,5
kWh
in Korea.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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