The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
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The chart illustrates how many
production
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and
consumption
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of
electricity
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in ten different countries (China, United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea) in 2014.
Overall
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, the majority of
consumption
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and
production
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of
electricity
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in China.
On the other hand
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the least of using and producing electric energy in Korea in one year. The number of using and producing
electricity
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in China with little difference is around 5,398 in
production
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and around 5,322
kWh
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in
consumption
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. Followed by the US has the highest both of producing and
consumption
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the electric power around 4,099
kWh
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in making electrical power and around 3,866
kWh
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citizens of the US used
electricity
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in 2014.
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, other countries
such
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as Russia, Japan, and India have around 1,057-871
kWh
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in the
production
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of
electricity
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while
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for
consumption
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the energy of
electricity
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is around 1,038-698
kWh
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.
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, the proportion of producing and using electric power in Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany is a little different with around 618-526
kWh
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in making
electricity
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and using
electricity
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around 462-582
kWh
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.
In addition
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, the lowest
production
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is around 485,1
kWh
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and
consumption
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is around 449,5
kWh
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in Korea.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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